Sample text for synthesis

Sample question and synthesis
Language is a window on other worlds. It can either bridge differences or cause miscommunication.
Explain if you agree or disagree with the statement and the issues as suggested in Texts 4 and 5.

Language is a major communication device between humans.Its nature of having different dialects and slangs can cause cross-cultural mishaps and even wars.However,when a common context is achieved,a language can do wonders from bringing strangers together to signing a peace treaty.
I agree with the statement to a certain extent,based on the principle that the right context would patch up the loopholes in a language.The three main points presented in this essay are the ways language bridges differences,the way it causes miscommunication and also how a common context transcends language barriers.
The most common example given to illustrate the way a language brings people together is when a person learns a new language.The learner will get to listen to stories about the native speakers first hand and may even feel close to the speakers.Other than that,tourists in a foreign country will get
to ask questions about the history of the ancient temple if he or she learns the local dialect.I have also been able to get an insight of my Chinese friends’ jokes because I could pick up certain words here and there.Certainly,when two people understand a common language,experiences can be shared and differences in terms of race,country of origin and others can be blurred.

However,what happens when the context is lost in the process of receiving the message?Even people of the same language can fight over the correct categorization of tomatoes.Well,it depends on each person’s belief whether tomatoes are vegetables or fruit.Based on Text 4,the scientific community and the literary academics have a misunderstanding because they are involved in different areas.Each field uses its own jargon or technical words and surely each share inside jokes that the other would not understand.Text 5 also emphasizes the differences in how we communicate.The background and the upbringing of a speaker determines whether or not he or she will understand an analogy.Clearly language needs more than just words to communicate.
One word can convey so many different meanings.People who understand each other achieve this by having the same context when communicating.in Text 4 and 5,the two parties can achieve an understanding if they sit down and talk.Just explain a little bit more and eventually the context will be conveyed.The sciences and arts and humanities are not very different if we see the similarities in the way both areas carry out research to prove a hypothesis.And Dilbert might just need to speak out his thoughts rather than keep it to himself.
To sum up,language is indeed a device to close the differences between two speakers.However,it cannot be used per se and must be complemented by the correct context as it sometimes may cause miscommunication.

sample questions and suggested answers

Question 1:Novels and documentaries reveal particular attitudes and values of societies.In an essay,discuss this statement with reference to the themes,characters and issues in at least one of the texts and films that you have studied.
Why ‘reveal’?
Genre- Discussion

Introduction:
• Brief introduction to different types of texts and their functions: to inform, to acknowledge, to educate, to entertain…
• Express gratitude, glad/grateful—no more discrimination nowadays, due to upholding of multiculturalism policy.
• Thesis statement: some authors tend to use texts as a tool or medium to expose the readers to some particular attitudes and values of societies due to specific reasons.


1st point

• Topic sentence: authors try to use texts to reveal some issues caused by particular attitudes and values of the societies so that the awareness of the issue could be raised.
• Elaboration:
• Some of the issues had long existed, but left unacknowledged.
• Through vivid description as well as the approaches used by the authors to convey the message to the readers(e.g: tone, linguistic devices, lexis) readers would be able to share the same experience/empathize with the author, will become more concerned about the issue.
• Example from text: ‘Desert Flower’ by Waris Dirie
• Vivid description of the FGM procedure, highlighting the inhuman part of the ‘mutilaton’
• E.g: For writers of autobiographies like Dirie, although English wasn’t her mother tongue, but language did not become a barrier for her to produce a text that recount her horrible experience of living in a male dominated society where females like her are subjected to cruel practices of FGM, rape and arranged marriage, as women are objectify as merely trading commodity. Through the vivid description of her novel ‘Desert Flower’, she managed to shed light on an issue that is dear to her heart—the subjugation of women. The readers, or society in general, might not be a stranger to this issue, but the fact is that it is often overlooked due to the subtlety of its occurrence. By having brave authors like Dirie producing texts that can reach out to every level of the society, bringing the issue to the frontline, forcing the readers to face it head on and to acknowledge……

• Example from text: ‘The Forgotten Woman’
• Shows the ‘truth’ behind the ancient ritual/practice of the Indian culture—discrimination against women, particularly widows.
• Interviews in the documentary provides a clearer and more ‘real’ image of the culture.

• Example from text: ‘Bowling For Columbine’ by Michael Moore
• Bring to surface the issue of violation of firearm or gun control- it is common for US citizens to possess firearms, the normalization of weapon possession, lead to the increase in number of murder/massacre in the state.
• Instead of for self-defense, lead to offenses. Make hurting or even killing others all too easy.


2nd Point

• Topic sentence: Authors try to present some particular attitudes and values of society in another way or through another context, as these attitudes and values might be perceived differently or even as being negative due to different cultural context. As a result, the perception or attitude of the text’s consumers towards the mentioned cultures might change. / Authors try to shed different light on pre-conception or attitudes of readers towards a certain culture or community. Reveal sides that are not commonly known to general public, with the objective of….
• Elaboration:
• Different people- different context- different viewpoint on some particular attitudes which might be foreign to.
• Authors/producers of texts might try to challenge or reinforce the stereotypical images of some cultures.

• Example from text: ‘Falling Leaves’ by Adeline Yen Mah
• Shows that the supposedly oriental Chinese community does indeed absorbs and practices western culture and values—challenges the stereotype
• Globalization had formed a universal culture where all cultures are intertwined, esp to the west.
• Example from text: ‘Desert Flower’ by Waris Dirie
• The author highlighted her own culture( the practice, their living conditions, their obligation in everyday life, the values that they hold on to- these descriptions show that the author is happy and contented with her own culture- although others or outsiders might have negative perceptions of the Somali culture: poor living condition, extreme poverty, lack of infrastructure, uncivilized…. But author instead turn the table and criticized the other cultures instead, while defending her own.)


Conclusion

• Texts have different functions.
• They could be powerful and effective if the authors use the right approaches to present their ideas to the readers. It may convey messages that might be lost in the rigmaroles of our daily communication.
• But as readers: should not just read the text—must try to get under the skin of authors and pay attention to the real message wished to be conveyed.

























How to answer questions in Sec 2 –synthesize ideas,compare and contrast.


The question for this section provides a particular focus and direction to candidates.

Candidates are required not to simply identify the overall main ideas of the two texts but more specifically the main ideas about the focus question.It also needs personal experiences and observations.

The better responses synthesized ideas from all texts,using quotes and examples to support the main ideas.
They could compare and contrast points across the texts.

Weaker responses lack balance in their treatment of the two texts,or make only scant reference to one of the text.Some did not refer to the texts and just provided superficial responses of their own opinions and anecdotal evidence.






Question

Compare and contrast the information given in the texts by explaining the changing trends in Australian attitudes to and participation in sport.Refer to your own experience where appropriate.
Setting the background to lead reader to the thesis

When the Olympic torch was finally lit in Sydney in the year 2000,there was no doubt a great sense of pride in the souls of all Australians.What greater honour can a nation have than to be the gracious host of the first Games of the new millennium?
And if that was not enough,Australia’s magnificent display of sporting talents and athletic prowess in various sporting events just about sealed the nation’s status as a sports powerhouse.This perhaps may come as but a small surprise for many Australians,as the very essence of the “Australian identity” is closely linked to sports.

State the thesis and preview of ideas in the body

However,as with all national identities,the Australian attitude and participation in sports is evolving and new trends are emerging which may bring about a great shift in the sports landscape of the nation.

Points are arranged in ascending order of importance with transition linkers

Firstly,there is a shift in which colonial sports,like rugby and cricket are losing their fan base.Instead,the popularity of sports is increasing based upon media coverage.Before the advent of commercialized sport,the popularity of a sport was simply based on the number of people who played it.Yet,the economic theory of Say’s law,in which supply creates its own demand,seems,at present,to be the logical explanation for this growing trend.According to text 6(Standing Committee on Recreation and Sport,2005),quintessential activities to the national identity such as rugby and cricket are not even among the top 10 sporting activities in Australia.Instead wider media coverage over “foreign” sports like basketball and volleyball have provided encouragement to the public,in particular the youth,to engage in these sports.From this,we can see that the mass media acts as a catalyst in transforming national culture and moulding all identities into a single globalised stereotype.
Urbanisation also plays a part in this trend.While the process may be intrinsic,vis,a process that takes place within a country,external forces like globalization and a global supply chain have hastened the rapid development of Australia,hence,profoundly altering its cultural landscape.According to text 5 (Mugford,2001)support for sports is coming more from urban demand,and that”the role of the community and of the rural regions” is dwindling.Thus,the demand for sports which are easy,quick and individualistic,is increasing at an exponential rate.From Text 6,we can see that 4 of the top 10 sports in Australia require nothing more than a pair of decent shoes.Urbanisation has further brought greater emancipation for women,as money,not sex,is king.Female participation in sports throughout Australia is much greater than for men,as depicted in Text 7(Standing Committee on Recreation and Sport,2006)showing overall participation in sports by region and sex.In short,trends in sports participation is gender blind and is being shaped by the urbanization of the country.
By far the greatest impact the Australian sports identity has faced is money.TV rights,advertisement contracts and media moguls have led to a trend where the popularity of sports is largely determined by the amount of money it receives.According to Text 5,individualistic values have creeped into sports and atheletes are being exalted and praised as “the perfect sportsperson”;naturally after signing a contract with Addidas,Nike or any of the other multinational sports corporations.In the globalised world where”money talks” and “money matters”,small town communities with their dimunitive economies have no chance to support their clubs and their struggle to revive the golden age of Australian sports is indeed commendable,but altogether in vain.

Concluding para-summarizes the main points with prediction
“They ruined it-Abramovich,Dubai and oil”,said Arsene Wenger,manager of the world renowned English football club Arsenal.Well respected for having a keen eye for talent,the Frenchman clearly expresses his disappointment in a sporting arena that is no longer based on raw talent and skill.Instead,sports has been commercialized and made into a business,whereby all sports compete against each other for TV coverage,money and recognition,amidst a world that is becoming smaller and smaller,and the differences between genders,nations and cultures becoming increasingly blur.
If Australians do not become aware of this worrisome trend,they may one day lose their very own identity as a people,as a nation,as a sporting powerhouse even.

Best Wishes

In a few more days, all of you will be facing the ultimate test... for this year(off course there's more to come in life).

I would like to take this opportunity to wish all of you the best. Know that what matters the most is that you have done your best.


Love,
Derick

sample of essay questions for part 3

Sample questions

1. Novels and documentaries reveal particular attitudes and values of societies.In an essay,discuss this statement with reference to the themes,characters and issues in at least one of the texts and films that you have studied.

2. Australia is a democratic country in which everyone is treated equally and fairly.Write a speech in which you discuss this statement making reference to your own experiences and the knowledge gained from texts where appropriate.


3. Should parents be responsible for their children’s actions?
Create a feature article around this topic.You may support your arguments with relevant examples and evidence from texts you have studied.

4. It is inevitable that cultural traditions must be lost as technology develops.Are tradition and technology compatible? In an essay,present an argument using your own ideas,knowledge and experience.You may support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence from texts you have studied.
5. Inexperience,over-confidence and a tendency to take risks make young drivers more vulnerable on our roads! Write a letter to the editor outlining your views.You may agree or disagree with the writer’s opinion but your points must be supported by examples.

6. I Pods- a blessing or a curse
Write a speech on this topic to give to your classmates.

7. Write a feature article for your school magazine on the topic: “Communication in the year 2050.”

8. Nowadays,the demands of school leave too little
time for leisure.
In a letter to the editor,present your views on this statement.

9. The emphasis on the cult of celebrity in the media has a negative effect on young people’s values. Create a feature article around this topic.Ensure that you support your arguments with examples.

10. Sport and drugs shouldn’t mix.Write a speech in which you discuss this statement,making reference to your own experiences and the knowledge gained from texts studied during this course.

11. Migrants in Australia should be encouraged to keep and promote theor own cultural traditions.In anessay,develop an argument that agrees or disagrees with this statement,using your own ideas,knowledge and experience.Refer to texts you have studied .

12. Recent reports in the newspapers have suggested that school balls should be banned.Write a letter to the editor giving your views on this issue.You may agree or disagree with the suggestion but support your point with examples.

13. The subjects that authors explore in their writing can allow us to gain a deeper understanding of ourselves and other people.In an essay discuss this statement with reference to the themes,characters and issues in at least one of the texts you have studied.

exam bloppers

What is the comparison of Sophia Loren to a giraffe used to illustrate?

A:the flour that is on her shoulder

Give two negative stereotypes of the elderly
A:walk ugly B:no talking

Ladies and gentlemen

This speech is provided to alert the communities the authorities stay in mind since the damaged and death are not able to be brought back and get fixed,destruction of environment had to be halt.

Ladies and gentlemen

Frustrations overwhelmed but fearless to convey this message.In Canadian,the population lead a wealthy and luxurious lifestyles,wasting and throwing is not uncommon.Yet sharing to the needy is not done.Wealthy nations as Canada are being possesive,sharing meant losing.

The grown ups taught the youngs to be kind to others yet they act opposite as they speak.In this century children are not being able to be hoax,ability to think and analyse are not only superior in adults.Words are spoken and must be realised with promise,think for the future generation,not in terms of material but the environment where all living creatures come from and live in.

Thank you


A symphatic former cow slaughter depicts his everyday chores was to inject pesticides to the cow in order for their fast growing.